her world as she knew it
they say there is no setting
or rising of the sun
they say it is always there
and it’s just your imagination
that sometimes it is not
with that in mind I stood at the
doorstep and handed a child
paper and markers and
asked her to interpret the
world as she knew it
from inside her mind she drew
countless circles orbiting
infinite stars
and every now and then
she placed a new moon
where you’d least expect it
I wondered how many of her
suns supported life as we know it
and as I was about to ask her
she told me she needed
more space and time
september two thousand fourteen
copyright j matthew waters
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Love this, John –
‘and every now and then
she placed a new moon
where you’d least expect it’
and then that final line! Wonderful!
Thank you so much, Kathleen – I’m very pleased that you think so!
Lovely John xx
Thank you so much, Shân.
You’re welcome my lovely
The words here…they are dancing….in my ears in my soul…Thanks for that…
Thank you, Mirna – I’m happy this poem speaks to you….
Enchanting.. I think we all dream of that kind of space and time..
Thank-you for the visits and comments, Björn.
so very beautiful, I loved it from beginning to end~ 🙂
thank you very much, Neha