all things new again
autumn arrives right on time
a reminder that none of us
can forever enjoy
the endless days of light
early in the morning
when the sky is untouched
by a belated sun
you are awakened by little leaves
knocked around by tortuous winds
forming strength as a collective
and striking window panes
as if they were sheets of rain
nothing can escape the transition
into this slow death
where you are bound
to experience the creepiness
entering your soul
leaving you hungry and cold
and wishing for all things new again
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september two thousand twelve
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This time of changed and transition eventually leads us to rebirth in hope.
Yes, exactly. Thank you for visiting again, much appreciated. JW
I like this J:) May I suggest “…little leaves/taking collective strength from the /torturing wind/”. Also “creepiness” feels wrong when “loneliness” feels better? Please ignore if you don’t like and my best wishes, Steve
Hello Steve and nice to see you visiting here again. I’ve always appreciated your critiques and do like your suggestions. Let me kick them around some. JW 🙂
autumn so wonderfully described..enjoyed the description of, ‘little leaves
knocked around by tortuous winds..’lovely..
thank you so very much 🙂
So Beautiful loving all your posts~ I also love how I can hear you read it to me 🙂
thank you so much – it’s a pleasure having you visit here and appreciative of you commenting
: ) will continue to look forward to new posts~