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poetry by j matthew waters

outside my window

peering out my window
clouds gather around
and darken
a once promising
bright day

blackbirds circle above
slowly descending
and squawking
instinctively finding
shelter

thunder murmurs and moans
and i close my eyes
suppressing
a distant memory
knocking

once the showers arrive
i gaze past the pane
your image
refreshing like the rain
falling

december two thousand twelve
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Posted in Nature, Poetry and tagged blackbirds, blues, clouds, cry, lost love, memories, nature, poem, poetry, rain, sad, sadness, weather

7 thoughts on “outside my window”

liliessparrowsandgrass on December 29, 2012 at 11:04 am said:

beautiful poem, evokes deep emotions. I like the development of the storm into rain and the story weaved in between.

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- J Matthew Waters on December 29, 2012 at 3:57 pm said:
  
  thank you so much ms vachal
  
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thatcameraguy (@Jack9eight5) on December 29, 2012 at 3:50 pm said:

@Jack9eight5 was here.

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- J Matthew Waters on December 29, 2012 at 3:55 pm said:
  
  i imagine so – thank you for stopping by
  
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wifsie on December 30, 2012 at 2:45 pm said:

Isn’t playing with words magical? It’s as refreshing as your imagination and talent!

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- J Matthew Waters on December 30, 2012 at 3:02 pm said:
  
  Indeed it is, Maryse. Thanks so much for visiting and commenting. 😉
  
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suzzeq on April 15, 2013 at 8:57 pm said:

Reblogged this on suzzeq's Blog.

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